bewilderness

 

 

a single rose
reveals itself today
in the twilight

confused by this early
humid, heavy heat…
beautiful and fragrant,
perfect in its loneliness

not unlike the girl
tiny, wandering
in the vast bewilderness,
the ambiguous landscape
of an ill-defined union

a tear trickles slowly down
her cheek
and she turns her loving
grateful gaze upwards…

as the word
hope
forms in her heart.

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2 Responses to “bewilderness”

  1. Nice imagery and use of the language. Well done!

    -smith

    *

    thanQ you so much for dropping by
    and commenting.
    – yvonne

  2. beautiful
    simply
    beautiful

    *

    REPLY:

    i consider that very high praise coming from you
    thanQ so much

    BTW: ’twas merely luck that i found this
    akismet grabbed you and spammed you!

    anxiously awaiting the next ROTB…
    – yvonne

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