bewilderness
a single rose
reveals itself today
in the twilight
confused by this early
humid, heavy heat…
beautiful and fragrant,
perfect in its loneliness
not unlike the girl
tiny, wandering
in the vast bewilderness,
the ambiguous landscape
of an ill-defined union
a tear trickles slowly down
her cheek
and she turns her loving
grateful gaze upwards…
as the word
hope
forms in her heart.
June 18, 2008 at 11:29 pm
Nice imagery and use of the language. Well done!
-smith
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thanQ you so much for dropping by
and commenting.
– yvonne
July 9, 2008 at 9:21 am
beautiful
simply
beautiful
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REPLY:
i consider that very high praise coming from you
thanQ so much
BTW: ’twas merely luck that i found this
akismet grabbed you and spammed you!
anxiously awaiting the next ROTB…
– yvonne